As of right now my current revision strategy of course is to go back and look over my peers comments to ascertain what my next move is. So far I’m just making sure that all my structures are in place in terms of paragraph organization. I felt confident in my language however I will be going back to ensure I’m not overdoing it. In addition, I plan on making sure when I read again to see that my essay is about my opinions and not Strawson and Beck. Also, I plan on finding potentially 1-2 paragraphs of extra evidence to make up for word count, that was a mistake I made on my last essay and I will not let that occur again. Also, I might also check in with my peer one final time at their convenience to look over my essay again to seek their approval or their own personal grading. Just as a safety precaution, I might check in with my teacher to wrap up and ensure everything is tidied up nicely and the essay is where its supposed to be before we turn it in. Other then that I believe I’m on the right track..
Good. You consistently provide your peer feedback. Well done. As you continue to improve, don’t hesitate to offer other suggestions. Use questions to help your peer achieve more clarity.