Category «ENG110»

Blog #13

Sorry for not posting sooner, hadn’t realized this was part of the assignment, only thought the formal paper was due. Also please forgive if done incorrectly, took me a while to understand the main question.

Blog #12 + Peer Annotations #2

As of right now my current revision strategy of course is to go back and look over my peers comments to ascertain what my next move is. So far I’m just making sure that all my structures are in place in terms of paragraph organization. I felt confident in my language however I will be …

Blog #11

Author Galen Strawson writes “I’m not a story” to depict the belief that every individual or living being that lives on this earth does not live a story. In fact, in the eyes of Strawson, they’re simply just experiences. However, Emily’s boyfriends father had to say otherwise. Ken MacArthur in at a young age of …

Blog #10

When I re-read Strawson’s writing, it only build less credibility of who he is as a person and an author. At first I just had a light care or light read, and saw that this author is a simple person ranting about other people. Upon closer inspection I really saw the first person usage that …

Blog #9

In Galen’s writing of “I am not a story” Garen argues that our lives are not simply stories. However, I’d completely disagree. Every human being from birth to death is a story. A story has varying problems, resolutions, build up, characters. Sure, some stories may be varying differently than the other in intensity or luck. …

Blog #8

The writing by Beck does truly have both an interesting but confusing piece of writing. Julie uses a lot of question but doesn’t provide a lot of answers which leads me to believe whether to trust her credibility or not. It is tricky to answer his question in regards to whether I have many selves. …

Blog #7

-Clarity: This portion of the rubric helped me double check to make sure that my vocabulary, and my syntax weren’t just bamboozling the reader. Alongside my peers annotations, I was able to really analyze my essay for a much better publication. -Organization: This part helped me analyze my own structure, which so far it gave …

Blog #6

After reading Anne’s writing, I did realize and if not agreed with a lot of her statements. That the first draft is the “child’s draft”. When I think of this, I think usually of using non-eloquent language with disconnected pieces of evidence and etc. As I glanced my own writing and even the notes my …

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